the long search

When you have nowhere to go, go back to yourself.

In Sleep





Somewhere deep


Where no voice can stir it awake


Where no hand can reach


Lies a dream


Somewhere deep


Where hope does not gleam


Where life does not seem


Lies a dream


Somewhere deep


The dream lies in its sleep…...





(Image: www.deviantart.com)

42 comments:

Agnes 10 September 2009 at 05:46  

So beautiful, Soul.

Are you the author?

Keshi 10 September 2009 at 11:17  

will it ever be awakened? Should it, or is it better for it to sleep forever and remain as a dream?

Lovely. I really liked this one. u r one great writer Soul!

Keshi.

Talking To My Soul 10 September 2009 at 13:29  

-->Agnes

Heyy hi, Agnes. Good to see you back here.

Unfortunately, I am the author (if I can be called one). Thank you so very much.

*cheers*

Talking To My Soul 10 September 2009 at 13:31  

-->Keshi

I have no clue if it will ever awake. I dont know if it should. Till then it will remain in its deep sleep, and remain a dream.

Thank you, dear. Happy to see you here.

*smilez*

WarmSunshine 10 September 2009 at 15:54  

This was brilliant :)

Good to know you're the author :)
Nice nice nice....

Talking To My Soul 10 September 2009 at 16:13  

-->Mehreen

Thanks, girl. I am learning to write. That's all I can say.

Thanks for reading.

*smiles*

mystic rose 12 September 2009 at 14:44  

It will surface when you are ready then.

Lovely train of thought and verse.

Pine 13 September 2009 at 20:02  

Love this writing. Brilliant writer!

Reggie 14 September 2009 at 00:16  

All always enjoy visiting you site.

Talking To My Soul 14 September 2009 at 13:34  

-->Rose

I guess you are right. In fact, I hope you are right. I will wait till that time.

Thanks for reading. Thanks again.

*cheers*

Talking To My Soul 14 September 2009 at 13:36  

-->Pine

Hey Pauline, thank you. But you are being generous with your words. I'm not brilliant in any which way brilliant is defined.

Thanks for reading. Howz HK treating you?

*cheers*

Talking To My Soul 14 September 2009 at 13:38  

-->Reggie

Thank you so much. It's always a great feeling to see your comment here. Thank you so much.

*cheers*

renaye 14 September 2009 at 19:42  

if only dreams in sleep are as real as reality.

White Forest 15 September 2009 at 09:25  

or is it a differnt world ?

like this beautiful line "am i a butterfly dreaming or a dream who has become a butterfly"

i am glad to visit your blog!

Ria 15 September 2009 at 12:54  

Lovely words...and the pic, just so apt.

Talking To My Soul 15 September 2009 at 13:00  

-->Renaye

Dreams will remain dreams till you wake up, Renaye. So you know.

Thanks, dear. Thanks for remembering to be here every time.

*cheers*

Talking To My Soul 15 September 2009 at 13:09  

-->Rathna

I guess, it's the same world. Just that it's a dream.

Thank you so very much for visiting my blog. Do return.

*cheers*

Talking To My Soul 15 September 2009 at 18:21  

-->Ria

Thank you, Ria. I'm glad you liked it - the words and the picture.

Thanks for visiting my blog. Do come back.

*cheers*

Pine 15 September 2009 at 21:58  

i say brilliant from my heart. Who cares its definition?! It's all subjective. And I'm being honest to expess. It's a great piece of writing. It really is.

Keep writing :)

~*~ Jal Pari ~*~ 15 September 2009 at 22:24  

Simply Beautiful!

Talking To My Soul 16 September 2009 at 00:05  

-->Pauline

Okay. I take your words. No disputes.

Thank you again.

*cheers*

Talking To My Soul 16 September 2009 at 00:07  

-->Jal Pari

Thank you, Jal Pari. Thanks for the read and the good words.

I am happy you came over. Do come back.

*cheers*

Cyrus Rumi 16 September 2009 at 19:10  

That was so beautiful...!!!

Have a great week, brother! :)

Cyrus

Liara Covert 16 September 2009 at 20:42  

Sleep is that period of wakefulness that slowly jogs deeper levels of timeless memory. The sketch is delightful and the sentiments tender and reassuring.

Talking To My Soul 16 September 2009 at 21:24  

-->Cyrus

Thank you, bro, for the good words.

Thanks for visiting.

You have a good week too.

*cheers*

Talking To My Soul 16 September 2009 at 21:26  

-->Liara

The subconscious level of the mind is never asleep, I believe.

Thank you for reading, Liara. I am so glad you liked it.

*cheers*

Just call me 'A' 17 September 2009 at 06:11  

i like that last line....the dream lies in it's sleep....

i can never for the life of me attempt poetry...so i'm always in awe of people who can..because i love poetry

Rick 17 September 2009 at 09:03  

Nicely crafted, my friend. Well done.

Talking To My Soul 17 September 2009 at 12:35  

-->A

Ha! Ha! Poetry and me! You gotta be kidding, A. I manage to write a few lines when it strikes. That's all. I too am in awe of people who write poetry.

Thanks for reading. Welcome back.

*smiles*

Talking To My Soul 17 September 2009 at 12:38  

-->Rick

Thank you so much, Rick. I value your words very much.

Thanks for reading.

*cheers*

Natural Moments 18 September 2009 at 11:51  

A very beautiful poem!

Perhaps all the chatter of the voices keeps the dream of the Soul in deep hibernation. Only Stillness, like a kiss, will bring the dream to the surface so that beauty will shine for all once again.

Talking To My Soul 18 September 2009 at 15:53  

-->NM

I agree. May be all I need and yearn for is that stillness.

Thanks, mate. Thanks for reading. Do return.

*cheers*

~vagabond~ 21 September 2009 at 21:10  

That is so beautifully written! :)

Talking To My Soul 22 September 2009 at 14:39  

-->Vagabond

Heyyy, thanks so much. I am glad to see you back here.

Welcome back again.

*smiles*

Lena 23 September 2009 at 22:09  

Beautiful.. want to say more but am afraid to scare the magic of your words away with my compliments :P

Talking To My Soul 24 September 2009 at 02:10  

-->Lena

Well...There is no magic in my words. But I won't certainly mind a few more words from you. Trust me, I would lap them up. Go right ahead if you wish to.

But thanks, dear. Thank you.

*cheers*

Anna 25 September 2009 at 10:13  

Such a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing, my first time here, you have nice blog. Anna :)

Talking To My Soul 25 September 2009 at 17:16  

-->Anna

Thank you so much, Anna. I am glad you liked it.

Thank you for coming over. Do return again.

*cheers*

moi 7 December 2009 at 03:52  

beautiful one.

Talking To My Soul 7 December 2009 at 21:57  

-->Moi

Thank you so much...

*cheers*

Mixed..Feelings 24 December 2009 at 17:26  

amazing last line....I really loved ur blog..its soothing and clam...

Talking To My Soul 27 December 2009 at 16:51  

-->Mixed Feeling

Thank you. I'm so glad you liked my blog. Do come over more.

*cheers*

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