Somewhere deep
Where no voice can stir it awake
Where no hand can reach
Lies a dream
Somewhere deep
Where hope does not gleam
Where life does not seem
Lies a dream
Somewhere deep
The dream lies in its sleep…...
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In Sleep
By
Talking To My Soul
at
Thursday, September 10, 2009
42 comments:
So beautiful, Soul.
Are you the author?
will it ever be awakened? Should it, or is it better for it to sleep forever and remain as a dream?
Lovely. I really liked this one. u r one great writer Soul!
Keshi.
-->Agnes
Heyy hi, Agnes. Good to see you back here.
Unfortunately, I am the author (if I can be called one). Thank you so very much.
*cheers*
-->Keshi
I have no clue if it will ever awake. I dont know if it should. Till then it will remain in its deep sleep, and remain a dream.
Thank you, dear. Happy to see you here.
*smilez*
This was brilliant :)
Good to know you're the author :)
Nice nice nice....
-->Mehreen
Thanks, girl. I am learning to write. That's all I can say.
Thanks for reading.
*smiles*
It will surface when you are ready then.
Lovely train of thought and verse.
Love this writing. Brilliant writer!
All always enjoy visiting you site.
-->Rose
I guess you are right. In fact, I hope you are right. I will wait till that time.
Thanks for reading. Thanks again.
*cheers*
-->Pine
Hey Pauline, thank you. But you are being generous with your words. I'm not brilliant in any which way brilliant is defined.
Thanks for reading. Howz HK treating you?
*cheers*
-->Reggie
Thank you so much. It's always a great feeling to see your comment here. Thank you so much.
*cheers*
if only dreams in sleep are as real as reality.
or is it a differnt world ?
like this beautiful line "am i a butterfly dreaming or a dream who has become a butterfly"
i am glad to visit your blog!
Lovely words...and the pic, just so apt.
-->Renaye
Dreams will remain dreams till you wake up, Renaye. So you know.
Thanks, dear. Thanks for remembering to be here every time.
*cheers*
-->Rathna
I guess, it's the same world. Just that it's a dream.
Thank you so very much for visiting my blog. Do return.
*cheers*
-->Ria
Thank you, Ria. I'm glad you liked it - the words and the picture.
Thanks for visiting my blog. Do come back.
*cheers*
i say brilliant from my heart. Who cares its definition?! It's all subjective. And I'm being honest to expess. It's a great piece of writing. It really is.
Keep writing :)
Simply Beautiful!
-->Pauline
Okay. I take your words. No disputes.
Thank you again.
*cheers*
-->Jal Pari
Thank you, Jal Pari. Thanks for the read and the good words.
I am happy you came over. Do come back.
*cheers*
That was so beautiful...!!!
Have a great week, brother! :)
Cyrus
Sleep is that period of wakefulness that slowly jogs deeper levels of timeless memory. The sketch is delightful and the sentiments tender and reassuring.
-->Cyrus
Thank you, bro, for the good words.
Thanks for visiting.
You have a good week too.
*cheers*
-->Liara
The subconscious level of the mind is never asleep, I believe.
Thank you for reading, Liara. I am so glad you liked it.
*cheers*
i like that last line....the dream lies in it's sleep....
i can never for the life of me attempt poetry...so i'm always in awe of people who can..because i love poetry
Nicely crafted, my friend. Well done.
-->A
Ha! Ha! Poetry and me! You gotta be kidding, A. I manage to write a few lines when it strikes. That's all. I too am in awe of people who write poetry.
Thanks for reading. Welcome back.
*smiles*
-->Rick
Thank you so much, Rick. I value your words very much.
Thanks for reading.
*cheers*
A very beautiful poem!
Perhaps all the chatter of the voices keeps the dream of the Soul in deep hibernation. Only Stillness, like a kiss, will bring the dream to the surface so that beauty will shine for all once again.
-->NM
I agree. May be all I need and yearn for is that stillness.
Thanks, mate. Thanks for reading. Do return.
*cheers*
That is so beautifully written! :)
-->Vagabond
Heyyy, thanks so much. I am glad to see you back here.
Welcome back again.
*smiles*
Beautiful.. want to say more but am afraid to scare the magic of your words away with my compliments :P
-->Lena
Well...There is no magic in my words. But I won't certainly mind a few more words from you. Trust me, I would lap them up. Go right ahead if you wish to.
But thanks, dear. Thank you.
*cheers*
Such a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing, my first time here, you have nice blog. Anna :)
-->Anna
Thank you so much, Anna. I am glad you liked it.
Thank you for coming over. Do return again.
*cheers*
beautiful one.
-->Moi
Thank you so much...
*cheers*
amazing last line....I really loved ur blog..its soothing and clam...
-->Mixed Feeling
Thank you. I'm so glad you liked my blog. Do come over more.
*cheers*
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