the long search

When you have nowhere to go, go back to yourself.

Last time...



I.

The tender dew drops

Falling onto the ground

Is all I can hear

Shadow of the night grows

The silence between the drops gets too long to bear

What then was a moment

Now seems like a year…


II.

Last time we met was for the last time we met???

21 comments:

Just call me 'A' 18 December 2009 at 14:04  

:)...is that you walking away?

i like the statement....very true if you think about it :)

spookydragonfly 18 December 2009 at 14:49  

Beautiful...lost in ones' thought.

Agnes 18 December 2009 at 16:48  

I am so happy you posted, S.

A beautiful post.

WarmSunshine 18 December 2009 at 17:16  

beautiful lines....

the second one gave a sad end to it. i hope it isn't the last.

REG 19 December 2009 at 01:42  

Lovely the way you put words together.

Talking To My Soul 19 December 2009 at 02:06  

-->A

Well...That's me walking away but it is not me at the same time. :D

Thank you so much for visiting and I am glad you liked it.

*smile*

Talking To My Soul 19 December 2009 at 02:07  

-->Dragonfly

Thank you. Thank you and thank you. You never forget to pay a visit. I am so glad you always remember.

*cheers*

Talking To My Soul 19 December 2009 at 02:13  

-->Agnes

I can only thank you, Agnes. Remember Pico Iyer?

Thank you so much.

How is our Rock Star doing now?

*smiles*

Talking To My Soul 19 December 2009 at 02:14  

-->Mehreen

Thanks, baby. I am here after a long time and so are you. Glad to have you here.

Thank you so much.

*smiles*

Talking To My Soul 19 December 2009 at 02:15  

-->REG

I will always be thankful that you always remember to be here. Thank you so much.

*cheers*

Rick 20 December 2009 at 04:56  

I lost your blog link! So glad I found it again. Such a sense of melancholy about this piece.

Talking To My Soul 20 December 2009 at 17:47  

-->Rick

I am so glad you are here, Rick. It's a pleasure to know you like to be on my blog space. Thank you so much.

I agree. there is a touch of melancholy to the piece.

*cheers*

Keshi 21 December 2009 at 10:10  

That somehow made me sad...it's a beautiful writeup but brought back alot of painful memories of a last time that I met someone for the very last time.

So beautifully put there Soul!

Merry Christmas & Happy New Year to u too!

TC & KIT :)
Keshi.

Talking To My Soul 21 December 2009 at 14:17  

-->Keshi

Last time for the last time....Sad but a truth of life. I am sorry to hear that but...

I'm so glad to see you here. Always look forward to that.

Thanks again.

*smilez*

Agnes 27 December 2009 at 00:58  

@ Soul: Oh wow :-)

He's doing OK. Getting treatment is no fun, but he's doing quite well :-) Thanks so much, S :-)

Talking To My Soul 27 December 2009 at 16:43  

-->Agnes

Good to hear that, Agnes.

Take care and thanks.

*smile*

Rick 28 December 2009 at 08:49  

Long time between posts for you, friend. I can see you've been lost in thought.

Talking To My Soul 28 December 2009 at 12:10  

-->Rick

Well..You are right, Rick. I had kind of lost myself. But I am back now.

Thanks.

*cheers*

Rick 15 January 2010 at 01:11  

Okay, I'm going to have to forward your name to the blog police if you don't hurry up and post!

slipperythoughts 24 January 2010 at 23:15  

very well written, stumbled onto ur blog, n boy! am i glad i did??!;)

Gayatri Shenoy 3 July 2010 at 14:29  

Lovely and heart felt. Well written.

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